Dragonlords of Dumnonia
Scriptorium
Writer's Block
(Revised 8/18/99)
This essay is devoted to something that plagues most writers from time
to time: block. A lot of writers talk about block, but many times
they are actually referring to another problem entirely. True block is
not when you sit down to write but the computer screen remains
blank. True block is when you are playing your fiftieth game of
Civilization at Emperor level or cleaning your refrigerator for
the eighth time today or doing absolutely everything except sitting
down to write.
There are essentially two situations in which a writer can develop
block:
- when you are writing on your own schedule and
- when you are writing "live" or against an immovable deadline.
When you are writing on your own schedule, there are certain things you
can do to prevent block from developing.
- Establish a place that you write. I can write anywhere
when I have to. (In fact, I frequently carry notepads with me in case
I find myself waiting for a meeting or a meal to be served in a
restaurant or in some other situation where I'd rather be writing than
doing nothing.) But I also have a specific space in my den where I go
to write. The place is connected in my head with writing. While I
know it's generally impossible to devote a space exclusively to writing,
I try to take non-writing projects away from my desk, such as to my
dining room table or outside on my patio. If I'm doing something else
when I'm sitting at my desk, I have a little voice in my head that
says "You really shouldn't be doing this here; this is your writing
place." When I was at college, I had three places I associated with
writing:
- my desk in my dorm room,
- the computer room in the library (I knew it was impossible to get
the same terminal every time, so I linked the whole room to my idea of a
place to write.) and
- a certain "coffee shop"-type snack bar (I absolutely never allowed
myself to go there just to eat; I had to eat and write or eat and talk
about writing.).
- Establish a writing schedule. This can be a set amount of
time you write each day or a set number of pages you must turn out each
day or whatever other daily goal you think is reasonable. Different
goals work for different writers. But, I can assure you, all pros have
some sort of schedule. I've had students tell me that setting a
schedule "blocks" them. That's really not the case. Something else is
doing the blocking. (I'll discuss a couple of examples in a bit.) Try
thinking of your schedule as the time you "get" to write rather than the
time you "have" to write. If you are truly a writer and love writing, I
promise, this will work for you.
- Work on several projects at once. If you have thirty
different projects going, it's almost impossible to get stuck on all of
them at the same time. Also, "The Great American Novel" or whatever
project is your pet, should not be the only thing that you count as
writing. Answering e-mail requires you to write. Sending out
marketing letters to sell your work requires you to write. Designing
characters and outlining plots and other such things require you to
write. The point is that in your writing place and during the time
that you've set aside to write, you should be doing something that
involves perfecting your ability to communicate whatever is in your
head to other people through the medium of writing.
- Don't forget you can edit. Most writing is
editing. Beginning writers often think that what they put down needs to
be perfect the first time out and that, consequently, whatever they put
down must be perfect. Hogwash. I have yet to see anything that was so
good the first time out that it required no editing. I grow extremely
leery of any editor who tells me my writing is publishable "as is." An
editor's job is to keep you from looking stupid <g>. Your editor
should be your absolutely best friend in the universe, looking out for
your back every inch of the way while you are in the editing
process. While you are in the early stages of preparing a manuscript,
that editor is often you. You have to learn to split yourself, to
separate yourself from your "baby" and look at what you wrote with a
critical eye. What would you think if someone else had written
this? If you can enlist someone outside yourself to read the MS
(manuscript) aloud to you, so much the better. You can often hear
things that you can't see. True friends don't tell you that what you
put down is great. They tell you that you are missing a comma or that
you used the wrong word or that your character would never say such a
thing or that you've used the same noun, verb or adjective five times in
one paragraph and twice in once sentence, or something else that's
useful. Last I checked, the number of infallible deities walking around
on this planet was extremely small, which makes it very unlikely that
you were one of them <G>.
So what do you do when you are writing under a deadline you can't move
for whatever reason, you simply can't get block if you wish to be
rehired?
- Settle for good rather than expecting to be great. Practice,
practice, practice, and then go practice some more so that you know how
to be technically proficient at expressing your ideas under
pressure. Someone who is consistent will get many more jobs than
someone who turns out a lot of junk with flashes of brilliance.
- Know what you are writing about. If you go into a situation
well informed, you have a much better chance of being able to write
something coherent than if you are completely unprepared. This is
what's going to save your backside if you are a lawyer in court who
needs to pass a question to a partner to ask a witness on the stand and
you have once chance to get the question right. The more you know, the
more prepared you will be.
- Don't be afraid to let the person who is forcing the deadline on
you do the editing. Producers love to put in their two
cents. So do actors. So does every editor I've ever worked with. Give
them something decent to work with. (It does occasionally work to put
down something completely stupid that you can then talk about, but
generally you want to provide something that is closer to the mark for
the finished product.)
Now, I promised that I'd talk about the cases that are not truly block,
and this is that point.
- Writing has to be what you really want to do. If you don't
want to write, you will find every excuse in the world not to do
it. Professional writing is not easy, seldom fun, and often a literal
physical pain in the back. To write professionally, you have to want to
do it more than you want to do anything else in the universe. If you
are cleaning your refrigerator or playing AD&D or doing something
else during your writing time or in preference to writing, then writing
isn't really what you want to do. Sit down and figure out your
priorities. For me, I'm getting a whole lot less writing done since my
son was born because he is more important to me than writing. TV went
away; I almost never watch it. Pleasure reading is drastically
reduced. Game playing, though I love it dearly, is confined to specific
times each week. What time I have that I'm not working to maintain my
family and my house and to support my religious beliefs is devoted
exclusively to writing. Maybe that makes me boring, but if I were a
banker, I'd be devoting at least two-thirds as much time to something
that I probably didn't care about. As it stands, when I write, I'm
doing something I love because I love it, and, miracle of miracles,
there are some people out there who will actually pay me for doing what
I love.
- Know what you are writing about. Yes, I know I mentioned
this before. But this is the number one "real" reason behind "writer's
block." If you don't know what you are talking about, you are reluctant
to commit your thoughts to writing. For nonfiction writers, research a
topic up one side and down the other and then pretend that you are
explaining that research to someone who knows zipdiddly about the
topic. For fiction writers, know your character. Be able to get inside
the character's head and be prepared for the character to pick up the
story and take it somewhere you weren't expecting. If you know your
character well, you should never have block. You should be able to
write what he would do, say, etc. in any situation anyone could throw at
him. Do not under any circumstances be a slave to your plot. Be a
slave to your character. Plot comes from character. Anyone who says
that character comes from plot is feeding you a line. If you want a
certain plot, then design a character who will generate that
plot. Anything else is going to sound fake and discourage you from
writing.
- Allow yourself to be human. To borrow from The Magic
School Bus, "Take chances! Get Messy! Make Mistakes!" If you are
human, you are going to screw up from time to time. Give yourself
permission to screw up. The world is honestly not going to come to an
end if you fail to get a piece of dialog just right or if you don't ask
the exact right question in court the first time out. Making the
mistake may inspire the right written expression. At the very least you
will have identified one of the many wrong written expressions. One
less to sort through before you get to the right one!
For Dragonlords in specific, I get very tired hearing that people don't
write fanfiction or attend RPs because they don't completely understand
the world. Heck, I don't completely understand the world. I
doubt I ever will. I've been involved in other fandoms for several
years now. Few fanfiction pieces are perfect Misty stories or McCaffrey
stories or ElfQuest stories or whatever else it is you are trying to
write. Very few Dragonlords members have requested and read my
extant novels. Fewer still have read all the character sheets and
logs. Only a couple have toured the almost 1000 pages of the main site,
never mind the materials that Dragonlords makes available to its
members. That's part of why I keep such close tabs on the
fanclubs. For RPs, I edit all the logs to make sure that they are
consistent with the stories that I've written (I'll even prompt you
during an RP if I spot something that is amiss.). For the 'zine, I
edit all the stories that come through to make sure they are consistent
with my world. I'll get back to you if something needs to be
fixed. Don't fret about it! Centuria is my world. I'm not going to
let anything happen there that I don't want to happen, and I'm going to
work with you to make what you want your character doing fit my
world. If you don't try, sure, you can't fail. But you can never
succeed either. So if you want to write, then write. Attend an
RP. Submit to the 'zine. Sure, you might fail. Then again, you might
surprise yourself and do just fine. But I can guarantee that you will
never know which will happen unless you try.
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